Last week in writing we did snot writing and it was really fun we made snot we GOT TO FEEL SNOT!!!
It looked like gooey, ooey, green stuff. It was disgusting like green jelly well I like jelly but eeewwww.
It looked like gooey, ooey, green stuff. It was disgusting like green jelly well I like jelly but eeewwww.
It smelt like hot degree acid. It smelt like dishwashing liquid and hand
sanitizer and soap.
It felt like disturbing green acid that keeps floating out of my hand and it was delicately freezing. It felt like dishwashing liquid, it felt really relaxing on my hands.
It went really fast when it turned on the acceleration ZZZOOOmmm
Said the distrusting green snot when, like Flash, it speed off my fingers
It sounded like a bubbling gooey green monster that had been pulling faces at me when it came out of my hand, so I threw it into the container and said “haha you are just some green snot you snot snot snot monster”, then he cried.
It was loppey, sloppy, scared, snot!
WOW it is an awesome story. Maybe next time you could add more full stops. I remember doing that 3 weeks ago it was yucky!
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ReplyDeletecool shot story i telly enjoyed it add some full stops
but overall its good!