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It was embarrassing! I had dropped the the toy cow and I had to go across the circle to pick it up. Doms throw was rubbish. Only a girl throws like that, but I won’t tell him that!  We were at Kiwi Can and we were playing a game called Chuck The Chicken.  Nathan and Katie were waiting in the hall when we got there.

We had to bunch up In the hall  the second team had to sit down In a circle at the back of the hall and start passing the chicken around. The first team had to start saying Chuck the Chicken Chuck the Chicken and until Nathan said Chuck the Chicken the  they chuck It somewhere then they run around the circle until they get back.

So the rules in Chuck the Chicken is no throwing at people's heads, have to throw It long not short,also you have to be honest and show resilience. Then we got into the middle then team one got in the circle Then team two spread around In the middle I wish we could play It again In class.

Pass it in tall the leader says Chuck the Chicken and you can throw It out the window The start is there are two teams and one team Is In a circle And the other team Is bunched around the hall and When Nathan says go we pasted It around and when Nathan says Chuck the Chicken then you throw the cow It.

Wherever you want but you can not throw It over the fence So when you have two turns then you swoop over then the other team go's and bunches In around the hull.So then the other team gos In A circle and starts say Chuck the Chicken and the passes around the circle and the other team

Says Chuck The Chicken Chuck The Chicken Chuck The Chicken.Then If Nathan said Chuck The Chicken And the you have to chuck the cow in two a place and go around the circle and If you Get back then you then your team wins.Then there last turn and then they have to over under over

Under over under then the person runs then and then the next person runs and It keeps going around.In tell Nathan Says stop then we runs to the front.So then Christian throws It out the window And we have to under over under over until Nathan say swooped over. So then we swapped over.

So It got to 8 people in the front of me so I had to wait for a while and then It got to 5 people and I couldn't wait until It was my turn.The other the team were about to finish and then It was my turn and  than I had to run around the circle,and the other team had one more person and than I got there before the other team was still going and then they finished and we were the winners.

Then It was our turn then I pasted It to dom and Nathan said chuck the chicken then he chucked the chicken then dom had to run around the circle then they had to do under over under over and under over then we won then We got told to line up In our 5 lines then we did points we got 18/half then we played GKQ’s.Then we Lined up until The other group comes for Katie I feel Positive for What they have been doing for us all year.

                                           The End By Nate