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Thursday 7 April 2016

chocolate Experience



Attempt 1: When mrs kee’s broke the chocolate & when she came over &
I was licking my mouth. & i get i & put it in my mouth i had fireworks
& a party. I small  hot coco I cold not when I put the brown nis And i
Sterd at the cube and it opened the eye’s the eye’s took me in
To a  chocolate land oh no it paralyzed me whatever shall i do

Attempt 2: When mrs kee’s broke the chocolate & when she came over &
I was licking my mouth. & i get i & put it in my mouth i had fireworks
& a party. I small  hot coco I cold not when I put the brown nis And i
Sterd at the cube and it opened the eye’s the eye’s took me in
To a  chocolate land oh no it paralyzed me whatever shall i do oh i no
Just find the core before it’s too late oh no i am taking a bite



we had to taste a bite of chocolate ech and i toke a bite my moth could marry a chocolate.  






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