I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, 24 March 2017
That Was Summer Poem
Last week in writing we rote a That was summer poem so first what I had done
what I do I went on to cool text then I got this font for style points then I rite
I remember the sweet smell of summer then I did I remember the sweet
taste of Kentucky fried chicken. I remember seeing the sweet ocean breeze
then theirs the rest of the poem in the photo. Then My Best friend in the world Josiah did
a funny but cool at the same time then I took a screen shot of what the poem was then
screen shot the comment This was Recount writing.
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poem,
reading alliteration,
Writing
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WOW great work Nate! i like how you put lost of "WOW" words but next time you could put full stops but other then that great work Nate.
ReplyDeleteSorry I meant Lots of "WOW" words great job
DeleteSorry I meant Lots of "WOW" words great job
DeleteThanks Cousin
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