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Friday, 24 March 2017

Writing out mud

It was icky, sticky, tricky  and clicky stuff sitting in the container.
It was rockie, stiff  and freezing it looked really flippy, snappy and solid hard.
It felt like play dough clay and a PS4 controller. It felt like dog poo, it was really active on my hands. It had rocks, bird poo, hard pieces of dirt and leaves in it.
It smelt like dog poop and dirt and bird poo. It smelt very much like a dump truck dumping smelling poo, like horse poo. It smelt very yucky
It made me feel like a little kid again. It was annoying to get this stuff under my nails. It felt cool, ugly, funny, ,gooey, yucky, gross and squishy.

It looked like smashed marshmallows and chocolate sauce .

2 comments:

  1. Hi Nate
    Great work I love how you have put lots of cool WOW words and putting adjectives in. Maybe next time you could not say dog poop in your writing a lot.
    From Mahaliya

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  2. Thanks Cousin

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