Today in reading and writing we were learning about how to write short and complex sentences. This is my one
Once upon a time there was a tiny village but one day they heard SWOOSH!!! Suddenly... everyone looks up and there minds were blown everyone started running saying ¨RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!!! AAAAA¨ Giants with big Suckers that were sucking up all the people.
They all ran into the palest and were begging not to get sucked up they were wearing suits with gas masks on with lights next to their eyes SHIP PP!!!! Goes the suckers then people were gone and it was quite.
They were poor and all the poor people were getting sucked up it was really sad because the poor people had no food or money 10 of them survived.
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