Attempt 1: When mrs kee’s broke the chocolate & when she came over &
I was licking my mouth. & i get i & put it in my mouth i had fireworks
& a party. I small hot coco I cold not when I put the brown nis And i
Sterd at the cube and it opened the eye’s the eye’s took me in
To a chocolate land oh no it paralyzed me whatever shall i do
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I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, 7 April 2016
chocolate Experience
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nice job in chocolate writing
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